Unit 30: Pre-Production Portfolio
By Peter Hennigan
Script:
Advert starts with Kadeem talking about the day of the
accident.
Flashback to accident
Kadeem and Peter are shown walking out of college, Kadeem is in front.
Peter is shown wearing headphones, with the music blaring
out of the headphones.
Back to interview
Kadeem is shown getting upset whilst recollecting memories
of the accident.
Flashback
Both Kadeem and Peter are about to cross the road, Kadeem
crosses and waits at the other side, whilst Peter is crossing but is also
distracted by his phone/mp3 etc…
Back to interview
Kadeem seems distressed, sighing
Flashback
Shows Peter in the middle of the road, distracted by
phone/mp3, in background car approaches.
Cuts to inside of the car where, Craig is distracting Mo
from driving, by changing radio stations.
Craig looks up and sees Peter in the middle of the street.
Craig: LOOK
OUT!!!
Back to outside of the car, Kadeem sees the car approaching,
speeding.
Kadeem: Peter,
watch out!!!
Peter looks up at Kadeem, signing.
Peter: (tuts)
Shut up, Kadeem
Car crashes into Peter
Back to Interview
Kadeem is shown crying
Flashback
Peter drops to the ground and rolls once or twice after
being run over.
Car tyres screech as the car brakes
Craig looks in the rear-view mirror, Mo looks into the wing
mirror.
Mo: Oh God!
What’ve I done!?!
Kadeem runs towards Peter, whose is now idle on the ground.
Kadeem: PETER!!!
Kadeem now emotional, shouts to the cars driver.
Kadeem: GOD
DAMMIT GET AN AMBULANCE!!!
Both Craig and Mo get out of the car, Craig reaches into his
pocket to call an ambulance of his phone.
Kadeem is shown slapping Peter’s face, shaking him and
pressing down on his chest trying to revive him, but no response.
Shot of Peter laid down on the ground dip to black.
Pan shot of desk which shows 4 chairs, 2 of which are empty.
Kadeem is then shown grieving at Peter’s gravestone.
Advert ends with shot of gravestone followed by narration.
Shooting Script:
Clip one:
- Medium
close up of the friend crying, maybe pan to the side to keep the emotion there.
Clip two:
- Long
shot, up to a medium close up of the two friends walking and talking flashback.
Clip Three:
- Close
up a friend talking about the accident, few different camera angles and again a
pan.
Clip four:
- Back
to the flashback, where a friend is running across the road. Done with a long
shot into a medium close up.
Clip five:
- Pan
shop. Medium shot of the friend sighing.
Clip six:
- P.O.V
shot of the car coming towards the second friend.
Clip seven:
- Back
to the first friend, where it’s a close up of the face to show how much emotion
there is.
Clip eight:
- Shot
of the driver’s reaction, done with a medium close up but enough to fit some of
the car in.
Clip nine:
- The
first friend trying to revive the second friend, close up and medium close up
to fit the two body’s in different perspectives.
Clip ten:
- The
driver calling for help, now a long shot to get the full car in and the driver
too.
Clip eleven:
- Friend
one then calling for help with a close up and a pan shot.
Clip twelve:
- Last
shot of the person dead, go from a close up to a medium close up, end up with a
long shot of the body just lying there.
Clip thirteen:
- Camera
panning across seats and then there is an empty one where, where the person
died.
Clip fourteen:
- First
friend grieving at the second’s persons grave, medium close up and pan to catch
all sides of the person- two different camera angles
Clip fifteen:
- Camera zooming out of the friends gravestone to end of the
video.
Health and Safety:
Our advert itself is all about health and safety.
The main risk is the pedestrians when we are filming the
speeding car scene, as we are going to be driving in an incredibly busy area.
There are also cars and buses on the main road and the
entrance of the college that we need to include in our risks.
We must also consider the death scene of the victim, where
he falls to the ground after being hit by the car. This could be included in
H+S as the victim will be falling on tarmac and could be bruised or be
scratched.
Plan B for the
Advertisement for the Fire and Ambulance Services:
As we are filming in the run up to the end of the year,
winter will probably be our main weather threat whilst filming; this could
coldness, heavy rainfall or snowfall.
Our major structure for this advert is the car that will be
driven by a second year media student. There could be any unexpected problems
to occur concerning the car; this could be that the car is broken or unsuitable
for the road or if the car needs an MOT.
The final flaw that could happen is if the Preston City
council do not grant us permission to film a grave’s headstone.
If these points listed happen, then we will have to
seriously reconsider our advert. We will have to rethink our structure of our
film, come up with a whole new storyline and re-do pre-production.
Treatment for the Fire and
Rescue Services' Advertisement
Our production that we have been told to create is a 2
minute campaign advertisement video for the Fire and Rescue Service,
and other emergency services on awareness of road safety or fire safety. Our
production team have decided to go for a road safety advert. The goal for our
production is to help people realise what can happen and how something that
seems normal, and that you would do every day can be dangerous and even life
threatening. We are going to have a student, who gets run over on college
grounds because of his mobile phone. In the end the victim will die, and we
will see his fellow students going to his funeral or putting flowers
were he died on his grave.
Within this production we will be able to do many
things as planned, as too much activity does not really take place. With that
in mind parts performed such as a person walking through college on there mobile
phone and all of sudden getting run over, we just need to find a person who can
drive to take place. In our production we will also need to have make up as the
person who gets hit by the car will have cuts and bruises on them and we need
to make it look as real as possible, to do this we aim to have a make-up artist
to do our actors make-up. Preferable we will need an empty road, and hardly any
students around at the time, so they don't ruin the shots. To do this
we will go out and shoot during lesson times.
We did lots of research to come up with our final idea
such as watching videos on the internet of previous campaign
videos similar to the one that we are trying to produce. we also
researched what exactly it is that our client (the fire and rescue service) do
in their day too day jobs.