Advert review.

My production titled 'LFRS advert by Peter Hennigan' has received positive feedback from various students who have viewed in my class.

In my point of view however, there are some points in the video itself that can be made better.
One point however, can not be changed, the part showing the death of Kadeem has a sound-booth recorded script.
This is because the microphone that was placed on the camera wasn't turned on and didn't capture the audio.
We could not re-shoot this part as Kadeem, Mo and myself had taken the makeup off.

The other area which I find annoying is the tyre screeching in the middle of advert, just before Kadeem gets hit by the car. I find the tyre screeching sound effect to be prolonged.

Finally, the interview audio at the start of the 2 minute advert, has some background problems, in some parts, the audio may seem unnatural.